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They Speak
On DUP there are many strangers …
they speak with stretched tears over a keyboard
and leave messages of pain on my screen.
Of course I reciprocate. Our waters
mix and mingle, carry information
to and fro accumulating until
one day a tidal-wave will burst the web-
site’s limitations, shifting ancient rocks
of displeasure, levelling mountains and
toppling dictators, drowning fake news and
eventually calming down to a slow
swish … swish, swish … swish, an ebb and flow of tides
in tune with a clear moon breaking gently
around the world on all its shores. Won’t this
conversion of tears be a glorious day?
Oh yeah!
they speak with stretched tears over a keyboard
and leave messages of pain on my screen.
Of course I reciprocate. Our waters
mix and mingle, carry information
to and fro accumulating until
one day a tidal-wave will burst the web-
site’s limitations, shifting ancient rocks
of displeasure, levelling mountains and
toppling dictators, drowning fake news and
eventually calming down to a slow
swish … swish, swish … swish, an ebb and flow of tides
in tune with a clear moon breaking gently
around the world on all its shores. Won’t this
conversion of tears be a glorious day?
Oh yeah!
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 5th May 2019
| Edited 9th Mar 2024
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(photo credit: Joshua Bond)
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Re. They Speak
Anonymous
5th May 2019 10:17am
Lol. Josh, i. Started reading seriously and when I got to the end, imagining your descriptive words as a picture, I had to laugh. Excellent irony. Well done
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5th May 2019 12:46pm
Thanks J. Your 'read' of the poem is really interesting to me. It did start out serious (holding in mind the pen is mightier than the sword) and continued as a "heartfelt possibility" that 'the word' will one day conquer 'the system'.
I wasn't sure about adding 'Oh yeah!' at the end, since it pushes the meaning towards the (unrealistic) 'dream on buddy' end of the spectrum - but then I thought 'Oh well, people read it how they will' since an element of ambiguity is left in the air. So I'm reading your comment as confirmation I did the right thing :))
I wasn't sure about adding 'Oh yeah!' at the end, since it pushes the meaning towards the (unrealistic) 'dream on buddy' end of the spectrum - but then I thought 'Oh well, people read it how they will' since an element of ambiguity is left in the air. So I'm reading your comment as confirmation I did the right thing :))
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5th May 2019 10:31am
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5th May 2019 12:48pm
Thank you CF; I guess I'm a bit of a dreamer when it comes to right triumphing over wrong, despite some kind of global lurch currently in the opposite direction. Yes one day ...
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5th May 2019 12:49pm
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5th May 2019 1:09pm
Oh yeah!
On this side of the pond, I'm hoping that "one day" is near my birthday in 20/20! What a celebration that would be indeed!
On this side of the pond, I'm hoping that "one day" is near my birthday in 20/20! What a celebration that would be indeed!
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5th May 2019 1:24pm
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5th May 2019 1:25pm
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5th May 2019 1:41pm
If it weren't for dreamers we'd all still be living in caves. Just need a conscious redirection to what is really important
Did enjoy your thought process and the meaning within exchanging around the world.
Maybe, just maybe...………….
Did enjoy your thought process and the meaning within exchanging around the world.
Maybe, just maybe...………….
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5th May 2019 6:23pm
Thank you A_T - you're right; it's not just a 'getting away from' but a 'moving towards' something conscious, as you say.
Felt a need to dream a bit like in Lennon's "Imagine". Feel that DUP is a global community where a collective dream could take form - in tune with other like-minded communities.
Well, maybe, just maybe ... :))
Felt a need to dream a bit like in Lennon's "Imagine". Feel that DUP is a global community where a collective dream could take form - in tune with other like-minded communities.
Well, maybe, just maybe ... :))
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5th May 2019 5:21pm
Oh yeah .. please and thank you... what a wonderous day that will be .. I'm hoping much sooner than later . Beautiful spill Josh
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5th May 2019 6:25pm
Thank you Jemac - and for the RL. Am looking forward to the music, dance and celebration :))
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5th May 2019 8:34pm
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5th May 2019 8:39pm
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I love this. Touches my heart like Lennon's song Imagine. His quote "Genius is pain," was the premise upon which my epic write The Animal of Infinite Imagination was predicated.
Soulful ink Josh. 💖🙏
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Soulful ink Josh. 💖🙏
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5th May 2019 10:33pm
Thank you Daniel; glad it had a heart response. Not heard of that particular Lennon quote - will follow it up. Thanks. Josh.
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Have always felt
that there must be hope...
else why not end it... today ?
no matter...we're still here... Ely
that there must be hope...
else why not end it... today ?
no matter...we're still here... Ely
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"that there must be hope...
else why not end it... today ?"
... a thought that's often crossed my mind, and it's not an unusual thought either - confirmed after reading Victor Frankl's "Man's Search for Meaning" ages ago.
Thank you for the RL.
else why not end it... today ?"
... a thought that's often crossed my mind, and it's not an unusual thought either - confirmed after reading Victor Frankl's "Man's Search for Meaning" ages ago.
Thank you for the RL.
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6th May 2019 2:19am
It's the dream that us dreamers, writers and seekers of the truth strive for. That tidal wave sounds scary and yet beautiful.
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6th May 2019 12:52pm
Thank you Wally. If dreamers and seekers leave this planet, there won't be much hope.
I'm reckoning a tidal wave would bring on emergency-quick evolution in consciousness - well, that's my hope/theory, if it were to happen :))
I'm reckoning a tidal wave would bring on emergency-quick evolution in consciousness - well, that's my hope/theory, if it were to happen :))